An Analysis on Fadhlan's and Zaki's Offering and Suggestion Video

Fadhlan : Sup!
Zaki : Aye!
Fadhlan : How are you?
Zaki : I'm good
Fadhlan : What are you doing
Zaki : Just chillin'
Fadhlan : I have a good news for you
Zaki : What's that?
Fadhlan : We are 11 graders bro!
Zaki : Wooh! That's mean there will be cultural tour right?
Fadhlan : Exactly! What place is the best to go you think?
Zaki : Hmm.. let me think. OH maybe Lombok. The pink beach looks awesome!
Fadhlan : Nah, I don't think so. What if Yogya? We can visit Merapi Mountain. The sunset is good for real!
Zaki : I've visited that place like 10 times.
Fadhlan : How about Komodo island. i want to see komodo. They're very cute.
Zaki : Are you kidding me? They are scary you know! They have fangs, poison, and stuff
Fadhlan : Hmm.. maybe Bali is the best place right?
Zaki : Yeah mate! Bali is good. I want to see Ngaben ceremony
Fadhlan : Yeah bro! I want to see it too! Do you know Kutai?
Zaki : Yup! It's a beach isn't it?
Fadhlan: Yes. We can do diving there! The sunset scenery is also very good like 10 times better than Merapi Mountain!
Zaki : For real?
Fadhlan : Absolutely!
Zaki : Oh my God I can't wait it bro!
Fadhlan : Yeah me too!

The underlined sentences are the  offering and suggestion

My opinion on their performance 

     Their performance is good they don't stutter when they're talking and they are very confident in front of the class. The script/text is also good they add some humor in so it's not boring.